Post by littlekitty5 on Apr 4, 2013 9:32:26 GMT -5
Character Name: Pebblepaw
Character Age: A little older than six moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: Riverclan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Pebblepaw is a light grey tabby tom with amber eyes. He has a short, white-tipped tail that barely touches the ground and he's on the scrawny side. His fur is of a medium length; it's not short, but it's not long.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Pebblepaw is determined and full of energy. He's not the bravest cat, but he's loyal to his Clan and friends. He's very curious and likes to explore anything; as long as it's not too dangerous. Pebblepaw is also very friendly and would rather make a friend than make an enemy. He doesn't like fighting and tries his hardest to settle an argument with words; not claws. And, like all apprentices, he hopes to become leader someday.
---Likes (at least 3): Exploring, hunting, and making new friends. He's also very competitive when he puts his mind to it and likes competing with his Clanmates.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Pebblepaw dislikes battle practice and, especially, snakes. He also doesn't like it when cats talk to him about his parenthood because it brings back bad memories.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Because he is small and light, Pebblepaw is pretty fast. This also makes him good at hunting.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Because Pebblepaw is scrawny, he's not a very good fighter, which is why he dislikes battle practice so much. His short tail makes it harder for him to balance, which makes him a poor climber. He also gets easily scared.
History (8 or more sentences): Pebblepaw doesn't like to look back on his life before he joined Riverclan. He lived with his mother in a forest some way away from the clan territories. One day, when he was exploring around some rocks, he came across a snake. His mother, who had been hunting nearby, raced towards her son and jumped in front of him, hissing. The snake bit her just before she bit it, and she died soon after from its deadly venom.
Pebblepaw stayed by his mother for some time, grief-stricken, before a badger came and forced him to leave. After wandering the forest for some time, a Riverclan patrol found him and took him in. He was soon made an apprentice, and he hopes to become a loyal Riverclan warrior.
>Sorry if I'm a bad writer. xD I'm terrible at writing these kinds of things.
Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}:
The sunlight filtered in through the den and birds chirped in the trees surrounding camp. Lilyvine had just finished sorting her herbs when she heard someone enter her den.
She flicked her ears and said, "Hello? Who is that?"
"Good morning, Lilyvine! It's me, Tasselpaw! I collected loads of marigold and yarrow."
Lilyvine purred. "Good, good. Bring it right over and I'll put it with the other herbs."
Lilyvine carefully took each herb from Tasselpaw and then placed the marigold and the yarrow in the right piles. As she took the last herb, she noticed Tasselpaw shuffle her paws uncomfortably.
"What's wrong, Tasselpaw? You seem a little anxious."
Tasselpaw widened her eyes in mock surprise. "Who? Me? No, I'm fine. Everything's fine!"
Lilyvine narrowed her eyes and stared at Tasselpaw for a little while more before turning away and sighing. "All right, Tasselpaw. If you say everything's fine, I suppose everything must be fine."
Comments (optional): Would anyone like to be Pebblepaw's mentor?
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Character Age: A little older than six moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: Riverclan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance (6 or more sentences): Pebblepaw is a light grey tabby tom with amber eyes. He has a short, white-tipped tail that barely touches the ground and he's on the scrawny side. His fur is of a medium length; it's not short, but it's not long.
Personality (6 or more sentences--these sentences form their own section and do NOT count towards the 4 groups below; those are additional requirements): Pebblepaw is determined and full of energy. He's not the bravest cat, but he's loyal to his Clan and friends. He's very curious and likes to explore anything; as long as it's not too dangerous. Pebblepaw is also very friendly and would rather make a friend than make an enemy. He doesn't like fighting and tries his hardest to settle an argument with words; not claws. And, like all apprentices, he hopes to become leader someday.
---Likes (at least 3): Exploring, hunting, and making new friends. He's also very competitive when he puts his mind to it and likes competing with his Clanmates.
--- Dislikes (at least 3): Pebblepaw dislikes battle practice and, especially, snakes. He also doesn't like it when cats talk to him about his parenthood because it brings back bad memories.
---Strengths (No MORE than 5): Because he is small and light, Pebblepaw is pretty fast. This also makes him good at hunting.
---Weaknesses (At least 3): Because Pebblepaw is scrawny, he's not a very good fighter, which is why he dislikes battle practice so much. His short tail makes it harder for him to balance, which makes him a poor climber. He also gets easily scared.
History (8 or more sentences): Pebblepaw doesn't like to look back on his life before he joined Riverclan. He lived with his mother in a forest some way away from the clan territories. One day, when he was exploring around some rocks, he came across a snake. His mother, who had been hunting nearby, raced towards her son and jumped in front of him, hissing. The snake bit her just before she bit it, and she died soon after from its deadly venom.
Pebblepaw stayed by his mother for some time, grief-stricken, before a badger came and forced him to leave. After wandering the forest for some time, a Riverclan patrol found him and took him in. He was soon made an apprentice, and he hopes to become a loyal Riverclan warrior.
>Sorry if I'm a bad writer. xD I'm terrible at writing these kinds of things.
Roleplay Sample {Required for first advanced bio}:
The sunlight filtered in through the den and birds chirped in the trees surrounding camp. Lilyvine had just finished sorting her herbs when she heard someone enter her den.
She flicked her ears and said, "Hello? Who is that?"
"Good morning, Lilyvine! It's me, Tasselpaw! I collected loads of marigold and yarrow."
Lilyvine purred. "Good, good. Bring it right over and I'll put it with the other herbs."
Lilyvine carefully took each herb from Tasselpaw and then placed the marigold and the yarrow in the right piles. As she took the last herb, she noticed Tasselpaw shuffle her paws uncomfortably.
"What's wrong, Tasselpaw? You seem a little anxious."
Tasselpaw widened her eyes in mock surprise. "Who? Me? No, I'm fine. Everything's fine!"
Lilyvine narrowed her eyes and stared at Tasselpaw for a little while more before turning away and sighing. "All right, Tasselpaw. If you say everything's fine, I suppose everything must be fine."
Comments (optional): Would anyone like to be Pebblepaw's mentor?
Read more: warriorcatclans101.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=createcatadv&action=display&thread=151#ixzz2PV3FaPwZ